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14 lines one topic abab cdcd efef gg iambic pentameter (./ ./ ./ ./ ./) — write even if its poo poo thats the point??? __ wrote this diddy abt being in bed all day (ed endings are pronounced (chang-ed)) — “Sickness” Suns rise lungs depress eyes spine lay downward  Shifts beneath cotton wool illusion of silk Such soft stills as the heart beats blood onward Sores spinal cord twists stretch crackle joint ilk Side turn legs cross eyes sore from prolonging  Silence as someone checks you’ve changed place  Slight defiance in latitude daylong Same ceiling above responses in haze Simple it feels to concave for hours Stretching not standing or shower taking Stench of clothes unchanged beneath cowers So avoid your duties sleep awaking See dreams gravity press patterns close eyes Sick day sweet laughter you lay on your lies
Jan 24, 2024

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